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We Have to Hurry by nakagoe

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This is really nice, some critique I'd like to give on this is:

The blood looks okay, but it's not consistent on every person. (and on the person in the middle, the blood looks really pink, not red) The guy on the far right's blood looks best, most realistic for this picture. Otherwise, the light looks pretty consistent for each character. Another thing just in general however, is that the folds on parts of their clothes don't really make sense to me, so if you didn't make quite so many in certain areas it would look a little more planned.

That's all I could spot immediatly, hope it helped :)
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nakagoe Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
UWAH, thanks Pineappleeee!! <333 I always have problems with folds lmfao,gotta work on those u v u" And yeah, the blood does look pretty pink.... I'm gonna try to fix it, I don't know why it looks like that omg

Thanks for the critique! > v <
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PineappleLady Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
np bro :iconkissyplz: don't worry, folds get easier... sort of ;P
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